Subject: Having read it through...
Posted on: 2008-08-22 06:26:00 UTC
...and in my trust-me-I'm-not-a-doctor-type 'professional opinion', I don't think it'd make a good mission. The technicalities of the writing are passable enough, and the NSFB aspects just go on at a fairly regular (and excessive) level all the way through so it's not like you could go partway and expect to exorcise at the 'most appalling part'. There isn't an appalling part. It's all just ... flatlining appalling.
That said, if anyone does want to take it on, consider me at your service for beta-reading etc and Agent Trojie can be ganked if you want backup.