Subject: Re: Beta Needed - Mass Effect - 3200 words
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Posted on: 2010-09-01 15:45:00 UTC
I could read for pacing and character development. You know my grammar, so someone else will have to read for that.
Subject: Re: Beta Needed - Mass Effect - 3200 words
Author:
Posted on: 2010-09-01 15:45:00 UTC
I could read for pacing and character development. You know my grammar, so someone else will have to read for that.
I've got a rough cut of my Danny/Laura Bad Parody mission and I'd appreciate someone giving it a go-through. If you're not familiar with the Mass Effect universe, that's okay. I'm less worried about the parts relating to the canon than the character development moments and general pacing of the piece.
I could read for pacing and character development. You know my grammar, so someone else will have to read for that.